So I tried a new fuse; it didn't work, but luckily the laptop and cable are still under waranty, so it is being replaced... As soon as that is done I will be able to get onto the site more to be more active... It should be quite soon, so I will talk to you all very (hopefully) soon, as well as getting back to my writing. I feel so deprived :'( Talk soon. xxx
So here's my latest update. Unfortunately the fuse has blown in the plug for my laptop cable, so I can't get onto my laptop at the moment; not until I can get a new fuse at least. I will try to get one asap.
I've had one entry already for the competition, but I need more than one for a competition... so please just go for it. The links into the necessary points I have asked for can be as simple as a character reading a book or watching a film. They don't have to actually dictate what happens in the story. The deadline is not until 1st June, so don't worry about rushing your piece, and just play around with it and explore different options. Could you please put "Weebly Competition" as the subject in the email, thank you. If anyone has any suggestions for the site, you can email them to me or post them here on the site. I am always open to new suggestions for improvements and extras that I could add to the site. If anyone wants any help with their writing you can email me any pieces. I will try to give advice as required as well as suggestions for improving writing quality and developing your writing style. I know many other young amateur writers and I am willing to work with anyone who is willing to put in the effort. Add the subject header of "Weebly Advice/Criticism" for my help, and please include what you require in the email. Thank you once again, and I hope that I can help and you can enjoy writing as much as I do. xxx So here's another poem I wrote, for someone close to my heart, but I'm sure that most people can relate to the feelings. Let me know what you think. xxx
There is no longer need to follow, no longer need to fight. ' Tis only need to live with fire and to do what is right. What do you do when one is ready, willing to settle down? When one is scared and cannot find the strength to remain bound? Fear of loss and fear of hurt freeze me in my place, "What if" are the difficult questions, "What if"; I cannot bear to face. There's no real way to ever know the in's and out's of the mind. So, what if you do find my heart, but can its strings not bind? For me there is no other but you, who is within my heart, but what about if you are gone, desiring or not to part? What if I end up hurt or lost? What if I can't be found? What of guilt or of regret? What of feelings unfound? I have now posted up a competition for people to try. Take a look in the Off-Topic section of the Forum. Take a look and have some fun! xxx
So, I guess for now, some people might be wondering why I've only posted a couple of poems and nothing else... well, I have more pieces, but I am still working on a lot of them, and I have a lot of random extracts. I'm trying to finish up some pieces as quickly as possible, so keep your eyes peeled... You never know when I might put up a little something of what I'm working on at the moment.
One of the pieces I'm working on at the moment I suppose fits into the category of dark fantasy, though you wouldn't be able to tell much from what I have written so far... I might keep it nice and go for dark romance instead; time only will tell. The other main piece I am working on at the moment is sort of a twist on a costume drama; being separated into two sides - now and a few centuries ago - the storyline isn't simple and certainly has a few dark secrets and windy roads to work through before it is finished. Where to go next with that is quite difficult at the moment though. I've not worked on it for a while, so it's hard getting back into that frame of mind. Well, I shall get back to writing and see if I can't get in another chapter before I get back to the real world of school and exam revision. ' Til next time (which will hopefully be quite soon) I shall get on with writing... and may I send my good wishes to everyone, as well as hope that others may enjoy indulging in some writing time, or settle down with a good book. xxx P.S. Check out Mrs Brown's Boys. It is a hilarious program, or atleast I think it is hilarious. If you search it on youtube, make sure you check out Mrs Brown gets a bikini wax. xxx Once again, here's another little piece that i wrote a while ago. Some of the lines don't work properly, but i'm working on it.
Forbidden Passions As I picked up the quiver, There ran a gentle shiver Along my spine in anticipation Of the touch that would come From my instructor, the one Who would guide me and bring such sensations. Adjusting my stance Joyous as a dance Him, my partner, for this and the next Part of training in combat In the field and on the ma Together we fight and become the best. Our adrenaline pumps, Our hearts strongly thump In our chests, we prepare for fight. I learn a new move, Then he’ll push me til I prove That it’s smooth and is every time right. After, when we go to change We walk together on the range And though our future says we can’t We walk, our hands just gently brush How I long to feel his touch Cool fingers on me to ease the hot Fire burning me up inside out But I feel his struggles’ shouts. Desire versus honour within him Sweet, stolen kisses no longer Hold up to our strong hunger So at last it takes over, we give in. Here's a poem I wrote quite a while back.
I am the Earth’s moon, Held high in the air, I’m there all the time, But I’m never quite here. Unlike Jupiter’s Callisto, I am on my own, Only me to be seen, Not like others, I am alone. I am the Earth’s moon, I make no sound, I try to speak out, But my voice always drowns. I cry out in the night, When everyone sleeps, In the day I’m not noticed, I’m just background scenes. I am the Earth’s moon, I was once adored, People looked up to me, People once would applaud. But then I was lost, To the sight of all around, That was when I felt alone, When I wasn’t heard, not a sound. I am the Earth’s moon, I sit high in the sky, I will once more be noticed, I will once more be fine. I look out over all, And I care how they are, They will again be proud, And they will find me from so far. I am the Earth’s moon, Lost once to the eyes, But not again, no longer now, Will I be lost from sight in the skies. |